One of my friend told me to write a poem... about what she feels ohhh sorry what she "Think"
To write a poem from a girls perspective and that to without feelings :-( , it is too difficult for me and i thought only girl can help me out.
'Anjali' thanks a lot for your help, to frame this poem rather to write this poem. :-) thanks thanks a ton ...
I think "A poem without feeling is like body without soul..."
I tried my level best, not to put any "Feelings" in it but still... its a poem...
I Can't Say "YES"
I know…
U’l give me everything I ask for
U understand me n also adore
Its difficult for me…
To see pain in your eyes
and to say no more lies
Nothing said would be less,
But… I can't say YES…
I can see…
the love, the trust, the faith
the longing, but all in vain..
I knew…
Wen I’m with you
I’l be the happiest few..
But… I can't say YES…
I know...
Our future will be bright
There won't be a frightening sight
I need...
Much more time for consideration
To overcome the interventions
Nothing said would be less,
But… I can't say YES… at least NOW...
:)
ReplyDeleteheyy.. this cant b writtn without feelings!!
nywz.. u r the author, i jus pushd u up! thnks fr d acknwlgmnt ;)
ab ye kis ke liye likha hai???????? aur saale kabhi kisi ladke keliye bhi likha kar.lol
ReplyDeletebut accha laga mujhe coz ye most of the logo ke sath hota hai.. jaise ki tu.lol
I agree with Anjali, this poem has the most deepest feelings.
ReplyDeleteAni ata mojo sathi lihun taak ekhadi kavita ;-)
nice poem applicable to most of people.
Are hai ek friend...
ReplyDeletesale ruk tere liye bhi likhunga...
but ye tere case me hi applicable hai... :-p
mera scene to kuch aur hi tha... :-p
hey..really liked it :)
ReplyDeleteSpecially the title is perfect as it flows beautifully through the poem and it depicts the 'feelings' that according to u ,u haven't conveyed ;) :P
hehehe...
ReplyDeleteThanks pre... for understanding the feelings...
:-p