Friday, August 19, 2011

I Can't Say "YES"


One of my friend told me to write a poem... about what she feels ohhh sorry what she "Think"
To write a poem from a girls perspective and that to without feelings :-( , it is too difficult for me and i thought only girl can help me out.
'Anjali' thanks a lot for your help, to frame this poem rather to write this poem. :-) thanks thanks a ton ...
I think "A poem without feeling is like body without soul..."
I tried my level best, not to put any "Feelings" in it but still... its a poem...


                                                        I Can't Say "YES"


I know…
U’l give me everything I ask for
U understand me n also adore

Its difficult for me…
To see pain in your eyes
and to say no more lies

Nothing said would be less,
But… I can't say YES…

I can see…
the love, the trust, the faith
the longing,  but all in vain..

I knew…
Wen I’m with you
I’l be the happiest few..

Nothing said would be less,
But… I can't say YES…

I know...
Our future will be bright
There won't be a frightening sight

I need...
Much more time for consideration  
To overcome the interventions 

Nothing said would be less,

But… I can't say YES… at least NOW... 

6 comments:

  1. :)
    heyy.. this cant b writtn without feelings!!
    nywz.. u r the author, i jus pushd u up! thnks fr d acknwlgmnt ;)

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  2. ab ye kis ke liye likha hai???????? aur saale kabhi kisi ladke keliye bhi likha kar.lol

    but accha laga mujhe coz ye most of the logo ke sath hota hai.. jaise ki tu.lol

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  3. I agree with Anjali, this poem has the most deepest feelings.
    Ani ata mojo sathi lihun taak ekhadi kavita ;-)
    nice poem applicable to most of people.

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  4. Are hai ek friend...
    sale ruk tere liye bhi likhunga...
    but ye tere case me hi applicable hai... :-p
    mera scene to kuch aur hi tha... :-p

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  5. hey..really liked it :)
    Specially the title is perfect as it flows beautifully through the poem and it depicts the 'feelings' that according to u ,u haven't conveyed ;) :P

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  6. hehehe...
    Thanks pre... for understanding the feelings...
    :-p

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